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Catch a falling star

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This is a contest entry for :iconmanipulatethis:'s weekly competition.


Credits are as follow:

Background: :iconjlstock:

Girl's head: :iconauroradreams:

Girl's hand pose: :iconlarafairie-stock:

Dress: :iconattemptestock:

Stars: :iconsheisprettystock:

Basket of flowers: :iconsun-stock:

Hut: :icontwo-ladies-stocks:

Fence: :iconpeace-of-art:

I can't remember whose brush I used for the girl's hair so if you recognise this as your own, please tell me so that I can credit you right back. :)




This is my first competition entry and well, I'm so excited! But I'm having second thoughts to this. Somehow the whole image doesn't look or feel right! :( And I can't figure out why either.

Bah, it's ok. At least I'll leave with an experience. :) If I don't win, well, this is my first time anyway!
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Really good improve n .n

Glad to see this new photomanipulation, it's really awesome *-*

However, I'd like to mark out some little things that I think may be improved ^^:
1-I would've chosen other thing instead of those star. Maybe flowers, lotus, or something like that so it looks in composition with the basket full of flowers C=
2-The blending is absolutly awesome; really, really good! Maybe you should try blending a bit more the arm, but don't worry, I'm very picky (lol)
3-I'd try to change the saturation and hue of the flowers in the basket so they dont stand out (that green and yellow doesn't look very good ^^)

Just 3 things I'm picky on, wow, that's really good (xDDDDD).
If you get a final edition of this photomanipulation, you have one of my favs for sure!!

Cya! n .n